There isn't necessarily any incredibly bad changes made here, I just think it isn't as good as the original.
Melody
Drowned out by the lyrics a bit.
Evolution
Essentially the same.
Emotion
A bit less.
Bangerness
A good bit is lost unfortunately.
Characterization
Fits slightly less now.
Lyrics
Oddly, I think these lyrics are a much better fit for the alternate ending where she becomes a seriel killer. But for current Baiken, they could certainly fit better.
B.O.F. Bonus
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