The lyrics are bad. That is the problem. I already wasn't super in love with Make Oneself but making the lyrics antithetical to who Axl is just makes it plummet further.
Melody
A bit worse due to the strange changes at the end.
Evolution
Technically evolves more but it is significantly less fitting.
Emotion
Even lower than normal.
Bangerness
Didn't go down, at least.
Characterization
Loses pretty much all of it by how much the lyrics just don't fit at all.
Lyrics
Does not fit Axl in any way at all. And yes, I gave it a negative point value. I don't care. These are possibly the worst lyrics they could have chosen for Axl.
B.O.F. Bonus
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