An improvement over the original! While the lyrics don't fit Anji perfectly, they bring in extra emotion that the original was lacking.
Melody
Better in some ways, a bit worse in others.
Evolution
Still a bit too repetitive. Especially in the variety of lyrics
Emotion
The lyrics bring in a decent bit more emotion that the original!
Bangerness
About the same.
Characterization
Around the same.
Lyrics
While they aren't completely unfitting, they are certainly far from perfect. Obviously the death of Anji's entire country is incredibly important to who he is, I think it is also important that he, unlike Baiken, isn't looking for revenge. He just wants answers. These don't really convey that.
B.O.F. Bonus
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