I see this as more of a sidegrade honestly. The addition of lyrics both helps and hurts it.
Melody
The lyrics kind of don't fit the melody at all and it destroys any melody the song had.
Evolution
About the same.
Emotion
About the same.
Bangerness
A little less.
Characterization
I know I have taken away points for how all over the place and chaotic it is, but in terms of characterization it works REALLY well.
Lyrics
Honestly these fit Eddie pretty well. There is a certain desperation to it that especially fits how Eddie was at this point.
B.O.F. Bonus
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