Not what I personally would have done for the lyrics, but still works well!
Melody
Very slightly less, but only due to some vocals not perfectly fitting the melody.
Evolution
An improvement over the original! There are a few more distinct parts now.
Emotion
A slight downgrade as the lyrics don't make up for the slight loss in melody.
Bangerness
A lot of the bangerness is removed as the entire track feels a bit... muffled? I'm not sure how to describe it.
Characterization
A bit worse due to some of the lyrics.
Lyrics
A good recontextualization of the song into a love song, though kind of misses what May's specific way of loving is.
B.O.F. Bonus
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