Melody
Loses a bit
Evolution
The same.
Emotion
Gains a small bit due to how some of the lyrics are delivered.
Bangerness
The lyrics unfortunately don't mesh well with the existing melody which takes a chunk away.
Characterization
Loses a tiny bit due to some lyrics not working the best.
Lyrics
This is certainly a sensible direction I guess. It invokes the self-hatred they felt at this time. But I think it could be executed much better.
B.O.F. Bonus
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